REVISING (Passage 1)



Cheryl has written an essay for her English class. Read Cheryl's rough draft then answer the questions that follow.



An Adventure of a Lifetime



(1) More and more people are starting to look in places other than their chosen career paths to find meaning and satisfaction in life, and one of the most popular

ways folks are doing this is through volunteerism. (2) One specific kind of volunteerism, though, is becoming increasingly popular with people of all ages and stages

in life—volunteer vacations. (3) This kind of vacation, one where the traveler pays her own way and volunteers her time and efforts while on the trip, is being

embraced by people all over the world. (4) The best thing about volunteer vacations is that not only does the traveler get to escape her familiar surroundings and

see new sights, but she also comes home knowing that she has done something. (5) That knowledge brings a kind of satisfaction that a regular vacation cannot

deliver.



(6) Volunteer vacations take travelers almost anywhere across the globe to work on a huge selection of causes. (7) Worried about the elephants in Sri Lanka? (8)

Book a trip to its capital, Colombo, and journey to an elephant sanctuary. (9) Concerned about families living in poverty in Costa Rica? (10) Bring your whole family

down to help build new homes and learn a little Spanish while doing so. (11) Volunteer vacations can take willing helpers to the farthest reaches and most exotic

locations—some luxurious resorts are situated in areas that are steeped in poverty, so vacationers willing to spend half their time working can visit such places in

beautiful countries such as Bali, Mexico, and Brazil. (12) There is almost no limit to where adventurers can go.



(13) Perhaps the most compelling reason to consider a volunteer vacation is the feeling of intrinsic happiness and satisfaction of doing important, helpful work. (14)

Even if a volunteer cannot stay in the location long enough to see a project to its completion, just knowing that one’s work has helped people in need, brought vital

resources to folks who needed it, or helped to save endangered plants or animals brings a kind of pride and sense of meaning that simply spending money to lie by a

pool could never deliver. (15) This alone is part of what has caused volunteer vacations to become awesomely popular across the globe.



(16) There may be no better feeling than being able to visit an exotic location, learn something new, and return home knowing that one’s efforts have helped to

change the world. (17) Because the whole goal behind a vacation is to escape one’s usual, familiar surroundings and refuel, volunteer vacations seem like a win-win

situation with a promise of some kind of success for both the volunteer and those helped by the work. (18) For these reasons, a volunteer vacation is an adventure of

a lifetime.

Qestions: 1) Which of the following would best replace done something to provide a clearer ending to sentence 4?

gotten away from home

built a house

affected positive change

taken time to relax

2) Cheryl wants to add a better transition between the second paragraph (sentences 6–12) and the third paragraph (sentences 13–15). Which of the following sentences should be added after sentence 12 to help readers effectively transition from the second paragraph to the third?

Why not consider trying one of many different and exciting types of volunteer vacations available today?

Adventurers can go anywhere in the world that they can imagine.

Volunteers of any age can travel the world on a volunteer vacation.Volunteers of any age can travel the world on a volunteer vacation.

If benefiting others isn’t reason enough to try a volunteer vacation, imagine the ways you might benefit.

3) Cheryl wants to improve her word choice in sentence 15 to match the tone that is appropriate for her audience and purpose. Which phrase best replaces become awesomely popular?

skyrocket in likability

surge in popularity

change in recognition

increase in interest

Answer: An adventure of a life time

Explanation: More and more people are starting to look in places other than their chosen career paths to find meaning ang satisfaction in life.

Fill in the blanks:

Figurative ______ is used to go beyond the ______ meaning of words to create clear, ______ images in your readers' minds

What is the main idea of this paragraph??

Confucius is an important Chinese historical figure who adopted and taught a set of morals and life lessons that some people still practice. The morals and life lessons showed how the ruling class of China should behave. Confucius gave up a good-paying government job to teach about what he called “beautiful conduct.” His followers, called disciples, listened to his teachings and wrote them down. These written documents formed a social code, or way that a society should behave. The social code was passed down to each generation of the ruling class. Confucius believed that if those in authority set a good example, those in the lower classes would follow accordingly. (30 points)

What’s your favorite season?
Fall(Autumn), Winter, Spring, or Summer?

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What is your favorite thing to do??

Explain the purpose of planned discussions. Why is it best to plan prior to discussing complex topics?

Cheyenne is completing a word list with words from this paragraph.

Growing vegetables is an easy and healthy hobby. Fresh tomatoes taste wonderful and are not difficult to grow. Peas and cucumbers grow above the soil. Cabbage and kohlrabi grow near the earth. All are packed with vitamins and taste great!

A 4-column table with 3 rows. Column 1 is labeled Word with entries cucumber, cabbage, kohlrabi. Column 2 is labeled Part of speech with entries noun, noun, noun. Column 3 is labeled Example sentence with entries "Peas and cucumbers grow above the soil," "Cabbage and kohlrabi grow near the earth," "Cabbage and kohlrabi grow near the earth." Column 4 is labeled Meaning with entries a green plant to eat, a leafy plant to eat, blank.

Which is the best prediction for the meaning of kohlrabi?

a bulb-like plant to eat
a poisonous plant
a type of fruit tree
a flowering vine

Summarize the story about Robert Bruce use the plot outline and write in complete sentences

write an introduction, presentation, and conclusion about animals

What is the difference between explicit and implicit ideas? (5 points)
Select one:

a.
Implicit ideas must be inferred, and explicit ideas are stated directly.

b.
Explicit ideas must be inferred, and implicit ideas are stated directly.

c.
Both implicit and explicit ideas help readers draw conclusions, but only implicit ideas are facts.

d.
Explicit ideas always appear in texts; implicit ideas sometimes appear in texts.

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Answer ALL the questions.

According to the lesson above, verbs are identified by their: _____.

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Read the excerpt from The Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass.

We were all now tied; and just as we were to leave for Easton jail, Betsy Freeland, mother of William Freeland, came to the door with her hands full of biscuits, and divided them between Henry and John. She then delivered herself of a speech, to the following effect:—addressing herself to me, she said, "You devil! You yellow devil! it was you that put it into the heads of Henry and John to run away. But for you, you long-legged mulatto devil! Henry nor John would never have thought of such a thing." I made no reply, and was immediately hurried off towards St. Michael's.

Which best describes Betsy Freeland’s attitude toward Frederick Douglass?

grateful
resentful
indifferent
admiring

PLZ HELP
A credible source presents information that is _____. Select all that apply.

unreliable
trustworthy
accurate
biased

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Read the book Monster:
Which of the following statements best describes why Steve refers to himself as a “Monster”?

Answer choices for the above question

A. It is James King’s nickname on the streets.

B. It relates to the feeling that permanently goes along with being in jail.

C. It is what the district attorney called Steve.

D. It represents the actual killer that Steve is terrified of.

What is most closely the meaning of acknowledge as it is used in the passage below (paragraph 36)?

When you’re in court, you sit there and you pay attention. You let the jury know that you think the case is as serious as they do. You don’t turn and wave to any of your friends. It’s all right to acknowledge your mother.
Answer choices for the above question

A. verb | to recognize or accept

B. verb | to greet or salute

C. verb | to show gratitude or appreciation

D. None of the above
What do the following lines (paragraphs 41-42) mainly reveal about the people involved in Steve’s trial?

STENOGRAPHER

I hope this case lasts two weeks. I can sure use the money.



GUARD 1

Six days—maybe seven. It’s a motion case. They go through the motions; then they lock them up.
Answer choices for the above question

A. While the case means life-or-death for Steve, it is business-as-usual for others.

B. The guard and the stenographer believe James King’s version of what happened.

C. There is a conspiracy against Steve.

D. Steve is hoping to strike a plea deal with the prosecutors.

Which of the following inferences is best supported by the passage below (paragraphs 49-50)?

CUT TO: STEVE is made to sit down at one table. At another table we see KING and two attorneys. STEVE sits alone. A guard stands behind him. There are one or two spectators in the court. Then four more enter.

CLOSE-UP (CU) OF STEVE HARMON. The fear is evident on his face.
Answer choices for the above question

A. James King appears to be just as afraid as Steve is.

B. Steve feels more comfortable painting a picture of his emotions than directly confessing them.

C. Steve does not want to be the main character in the movie he is making.

D. Steve has no idea of how to actually make a movie.

Which of the following inferences about Kathy O’Brien is best supported by the text?

Answer choices for the above question

A. O’Brien sees her role in Steve’s case as one of formal duty.

B. O’Brien believes that writing a screenplay will hurt Steve’s chances at winning his case.

C. O’Brien believes that Steve is innocent.

D. O’Brien believes that Steve is guilty.

Which statement from the text most strongly supports the correct answer to Question 5?

Answer choices for the above question

A. “Ain’t no use putting the blanket over your head, man. You can’t cut this out; this is reality. This is the real deal.”

B. “My job is to make sure the law works for you as well as against you, and to make you a human being in the eyes of the jury.”

C. “I’m writing this whole thing down as a movie.”

D. “It’s all right to acknowledge your mother.”

Which of the following statements about Steve is best supported by the excerpt?

Answer choices for the above question

A. There is a strong sense of camaraderie between the inmates in Steve’s jail.

B. Steve tells his story as a screenplay because he feels so detached from what is happening.

C. Steve believes that he can make some money by making a movie of what has happened to him.

D. Steve is writing about his experiences in jail because he feels completely at ease while he is locked up.
Which sentence from the text most strongly supports the correct answer to Question 7?

Answer choices for the above question

A. “We sleep with strangers, wake up with strangers, and go to the bathroom in front of strangers.”

B. “They say you get used to being in jail, but I don’t see how.”

C. “CUT TO: STEVE pulling blanket over his head as screen goes dark.”

D. “The film will be the story of my life. No, not my life, but of this experience.”

If an unknown word is a describing word, the reader should find its meaning by looking for related

nouns.
verbs.
adverbs.
adjectives.

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Read the excerpt from Harriet Tubman: Conductor on the Underground Railroad.

She started talking about William Still and the Philadelphia Vigilance Committee. No one commented. No one asked any questions.

In this excerpt, which rhetorical appeal is Tubman attempting to use to convince people to continue?

Ethos, because she is using her own knowledge as a tool.
Pathos, because she is appealing to her audience’s needs.
Ethos, because she is appealing to their emotional needs.
Pathos, because she is using facts to convince her audience.

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What can you do to help the oceans become sanctuaries rather than a vast graveyard? Explain 2 of three ideas noted in the text.

Cheryl has written an essay for her English class. Read Cheryl's rough draft then answer the questions that follow.



An Adventure of a Lifetime



(1) More and more people are starting to look in places other than their chosen career paths to find meaning and satisfaction in life, and one of the most popular

ways folks are doing this is through volunteerism. (2) One specific kind of volunteerism, though, is becoming increasingly popular with people of all ages and stages

in life—volunteer vacations. (3) This kind of vacation, one where the traveler pays her own way and volunteers her time and efforts while on the trip, is being

embraced by people all over the world. (4) The best thing about volunteer vacations is that not only does the traveler get to escape her familiar surroundings and

see new sights, but she also comes home knowing that she has done something. (5) That knowledge brings a kind of satisfaction that a regular vacation cannot

deliver.



(6) Volunteer vacations take travelers almost anywhere across the globe to work on a huge selection of causes. (7) Worried about the elephants in Sri Lanka? (8)

Book a trip to its capital, Colombo, and journey to an elephant sanctuary. (9) Concerned about families living in poverty in Costa Rica? (10) Bring your whole family

down to help build new homes and learn a little Spanish while doing so. (11) Volunteer vacations can take willing helpers to the farthest reaches and most exotic

locations—some luxurious resorts are situated in areas that are steeped in poverty, so vacationers willing to spend half their time working can visit such places in

beautiful countries such as Bali, Mexico, and Brazil. (12) There is almost no limit to where adventurers can go.



(13) Perhaps the most compelling reason to consider a volunteer vacation is the feeling of intrinsic happiness and satisfaction of doing important, helpful work. (14)

Even if a volunteer cannot stay in the location long enough to see a project to its completion, just knowing that one’s work has helped people in need, brought vital

resources to folks who needed it, or helped to save endangered plants or animals brings a kind of pride and sense of meaning that simply spending money to lie by a

pool could never deliver. (15) This alone is part of what has caused volunteer vacations to become awesomely popular across the globe.



(16) There may be no better feeling than being able to visit an exotic location, learn something new, and return home knowing that one’s efforts have helped to

change the world. (17) Because the whole goal behind a vacation is to escape one’s usual, familiar surroundings and refuel, volunteer vacations seem like a win-win

situation with a promise of some kind of success for both the volunteer and those helped by the work. (18) For these reasons, a volunteer vacation is an adventure of

a lifetime.

1) Cheryl needs to provide the source material she used for writing her essay. Which is the correct way to write a bibliography entry for the magazine she used?

Miller, Kelsey. “Vacation Volunteers.” Easy Travels Monthly, Aug. 2019, pp. 18–22.

Miller notes that volunteer vacations are “easy as pie” (19).

Kelsey Miller’s “Vacation Volunteers” in Easy Travels Monthly.

“Vacation Volunteers,” by Kelsey Miller, tells about volunteer vacation options (Easy Travels Monthly magazine).

2) What is the best way to rewrite sentence 5?

Old enough to enter the ring and finally qualified enough and with my very own horse, I was finally, here.

And, finally, now, I was old enough to enter the ring and finally qualified enough and with my very own horse.

And now here I was, finally old enough to enter the ring, finally qualified enough, and with my very own horse.

I am finally old enough, and am now here to enter the ring and finally qualified enough and with my very own horse.

3) What change, if any, should be made to sentence 14?

Insert a hyphen after hand

Change immeasurably to imeasurably

Change had to have

No change is needed in sentence 14.

4) What change should be made in sentence 17?

Delete and

Change sat to sit

Insert a comma after anticipation

Change Fritzs to Fritz’s

Read the passage, and answer the question that follows.


Voting for the Academy Awards. Have you ever wondered how the winners of the Academy Awards are selected? Did you know that the selection process actually starts months before the presentation of the awards in late February? First, in January, nomination ballots are sent to members of the Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences. For most award categories, five nomination are allowed. The Academy's philosophy is that only people who work in a particular part of the motion picture industry are qualified to make nominations for an award that relates to that part of the industry. So, for example, only directors can nominate their fellow directors. The Academy believes that people in the same field can make better decisions about who is best qualified for an award. Next, members return their secret nomination ballots. Protecting the secrecy of the members' ballots is an important rule behind the selection process. Then, a company called PricewaterhouseCoopers determines the nomination results. Shortly after that, at the end of January, the nomination results are announced. Early in February, final ballots are mailed to members of the Academy. Then, members vote and return their ballots to PricewaterhouseCoopers. Next, the company determines the final results, but they are kept a strict secret. Finally, the winners are revealed when their names are read from the famous envelopes opened at the Awards presentation in late February. the tense anticipation about who the winners are is over at last! Left, a close-up of Oscar statues.

Number the steps below in their correct order from first to last.
___ A company determines the nomination results.
___ Nomination ballots are sent to members of the Academy.
___ Winners are announced at the Awards presentation.
___ Final ballots are sent to members.
___ Final results are determined.
___ Nomination results are announced.
___ Members return their nomination ballots.
___ Members return their final ballots.

Read this excerpt from Through the Looking-Glass by Lewis Carroll.

She was rambling on in this way when she reached the wood: it looked very cool and shady. “Well, at any rate it's a great comfort,” she said as she stepped under the trees, “after being so hot, to get into the—into WHAT?” she went on, rather surprised at not being able to think of the word. “I mean to get under the—under the—under THIS, you know!” putting her hand on the trunk of the tree. “What DOES it call itself, I wonder? I do believe it's got no name—why, to be sure it hasn't!”

She stood silent for a minute, thinking: then she suddenly began again. “Then it really HAS happened, after all! And now, who am I? I WILL remember, if I can! I'm determined to do it!” But being determined didn't help much, and all she could say, after a great deal of puzzling, was, “L, I KNOW it begins with L!”

Which question might a reader ask to gain a better understanding of this excerpt?

Why does Alice choose to step through the looking glass?
Why does Alice forget the name of the woods and her own name?
Why does Alice want to play chess with all the others in the garden?
Why does Alice talk to the gnat about the looking-glass insects?

School uniforms are good for the development of children. First of all, everyone is dressed similarly. If nobody has "better" clothes than others, then no one can threaten others simply because of their clothes. In many schools, ganging up on others because of what they are wearing is already normal, and uniforms are a way to protect the children from such acts. School uniforms also keep everyone from having to buy expensive brands of clothes for school, which relieves parents and takes the pressure of being "cool" away from the children. School uniforms also help children from becoming overly concerned about keeping up with the latest fashions. This gives young children more time to concentrate on important topics. In general it is possible to say, that school uniforms have a good influence on most children.
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Can someone read over my essay and proof read it, PLEASE? It's a Narrative Extension Writing for the ending of a book, so expect that.

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Read the story below and complete the assignment at the end.
02.02 The Great North American Circus

There was great excitement in Smyrna, especially among the boys. Barlow's Great American Circus in its triumphal progress from state to state was close at hand, and immense yellow posters announcing its arrival were liberally displayed on fences and barns, while smaller bills were put up in the post office, the hotel, and the principal stores, and distributed from house to house.
It was the largest circus that had ever visited Smyrna. At least a dozen elephants marched with ponderous steps in its preliminary procession, while clowns, acrobats, giants, dwarfs, fat women, cannibals, and hairy savages from Tibet and Madagascar were among the strange wonders that were to be seen at each performance for the small sum of fifty cents, children half price.
For weeks the young people had been looking forward to the advent of this marvelous world of curiosities, and the country papers from farther east had given glowing accounts of the great show, which was pronounced greater and more gorgeous than in any previous year. But it may be as well to reproduce, in part, the description given in the posters:
BARLOW'S GREAT NORTH AMERICAN CIRCUS.
Now in its triumphal march across the continent, will
give two grand performances,
AT SMYRNA
on the afternoon and evening of May 18th.
Never in all its history has this
unparalleled show embraced a greater variety of attractions,
or included a larger number of world-famous
acrobats, clowns, bare back riders, rope walkers, trapeze
artists, and star performers,
in addition to a colossal menagerie, comprising
elephants, tigers, lions, leopards,
and other wild animals in great variety.
All this and far more, including a hundred
DARING ACTS,
can be seen for the trifling sum of fifty cents;
children half price.
COME ONE! COME ALL!
Two boys paused to read this notice, pasted with pictures of elephants and circus performers on the high board fence near Stoddard's grocery store. They were Dan Clark and Christopher Watson, called Kit for short.

See assignment below
Characters:

Setting:

Conflict:

Rising action:

Climax:

Resolution action:

Reflection:

The author provides colorful descriptions of the growing excitement and the upcoming circus. As the passage ends, two boys read a notice listing a variety of attractions. Write an original narrative featuring the two boys as characters and the circus as your setting. Be sure to use details from the text as you tell your story.